Friday, November 2, 2007
Talk Talk Talk
Parker and Kelsey take some down time, eat, sleep and get to know each other better. That means there's a lot of talking in chapter eight. I know I shouldn't pile on the exposition, but I also know there needs to be some making-your-aquaintanc time. Eh, it'll all change in the re-write, right? ;-)
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Indeed -- and keep them physically busy as they talk: piling up rations, building a fortification, etc. As long as you balance the movement and the words, neither will seem like filler or exposition.
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